A Simple Wedding
Name :Arwanda
18010011
Class :Writing IIIA
A Simple Wedding
Some wedding are very simple.For some people,wedding is a simple occasion.Wedding just a formal session.They celebrate with a simple celebration and more focused on the sustainability of their marriage life.In Indonesia,there is phrase "there is no need a luxurious wedding,the main important is happiness for the bride and the groom's family".For the example perform the wedding in front of the house by a simple reception party,ijab qobul procession and just invite the close family members.In short,a wedding can be a very simple
Hallo Arwanda, This is Jihan, i would like to review your writing. Your writing is good.
BalasHapusYou have written the paragraph by choosing a simple way to describe the content. And then, you have written
every sentences with the content,punctuations and grammar almost perfectly. But, it would be better and more interesting to read if you add some opinions or some pictures to attract more the reader.
(Jihan Rizkika Chairunisa [1801010014] )
Writing III-A